Final polish for 4.3.1.

diff --git a/doc/CHANGES4.X b/doc/CHANGES4.X
index ccaabf1b0c52b1063f77b731b363a40bcd437faa..6eac82eb0ea7c703e8798d5f40d44697c94223af 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/CHANGES4.X
+++ b/doc/CHANGES4.X
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
-Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Wed Apr  5 18:51:49 UTC 2006
- * Fix check of game state on server startup (was new in 4.3.0).
+Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Sat Apr 15 11:40:47 UTC 2006
+ * Fix check of game state on server startup (new in 4.3.0).
  * sail now accepts a destination sector.
  * Tend could send bogus bulletins (broken in 4.3.0).
  * Plug memory leaks in mission command.
@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@ Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Wed Apr  5 18:51:49 UTC 2006
  * Fix retreating mine sweepers to use mobility for sweeping.
  * Fix retreating land units to hit mines with the same probability
    and to take the same damage as in normal movement.  Before,
-   probability was higher, damage was lower.
+   hit probability was higher, and damage was lower.
  * Ships could retreat into sectors owned by whoever made them
    retreat, but not in their owner's sectors.
  * Fix 'm' at the movement prompt of transport and test.
  * Fix march and test not to apply conditionals to sectors mapped,
-   which lead to spurious error messages.
+   which led to spurious error messages.
  * Fix break not to respect conditionals.  The bug let players keep
    sanctuaries.
  * Fix retreat code not to respect conditionals.  Attackers could
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Wed Apr  5 18:51:49 UTC 2006
  * Fix retreat and edit to zero-terminate retreat paths.
    Theoretically abusable for gaining information.
  * Fix format string crash bugs in load, spy and bomb.
- * Fix telegram editor: empty telegrams were broken in 4.2.21. ~p
-   before the first line of text never worked.
+ * Fix the telegram editor: empty telegrams were broken in 4.2.21, and
+   ~p before the first line of text never worked.
  * Fix ancient bridge building race condition that could break the
    test whether the player can afford the bridge.
  * Fix trade lot change detection in set command.  Probably abusable.

diff --git a/info/Empire4.t b/info/Empire4.t
index 029fbc51d0fc3f76e3aa536405ea1bf8f33ebeb2..858327563daf9ca93552940b949c603ab03d87ec 100644 (file)
--- a/info/Empire4.t
+++ b/info/Empire4.t
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ new Empire4 Server.  This outlines the various changes and how they
 will affect you, the player.  These were coded as the Wolfpack project,
 and bug-reports should be sent to <wolfpack@wolfpackempire.com>.
 .NF
-Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Wed Apr  5 18:51:49 UTC 2006
- * Fix check of game state on server startup (was new in 4.3.0).
+Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Sat Apr 15 11:40:47 UTC 2006
+ * Fix check of game state on server startup (new in 4.3.0).
  * sail now accepts a destination sector.
  * Tend could send bogus bulletins (broken in 4.3.0).
  * Plug memory leaks in mission command.
@@ -20,12 +20,12 @@ Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Wed Apr  5 18:51:49 UTC 2006
  * Fix retreating mine sweepers to use mobility for sweeping.
  * Fix retreating land units to hit mines with the same probability
    and to take the same damage as in normal movement.  Before,
-   probability was higher, damage was lower.
+   hit probability was higher, and damage was lower.
  * Ships could retreat into sectors owned by whoever made them
    retreat, but not in their owner's sectors.
  * Fix 'm' at the movement prompt of transport and test.
  * Fix march and test not to apply conditionals to sectors mapped,
-   which lead to spurious error messages.
+   which led to spurious error messages.
  * Fix break not to respect conditionals.  The bug let players keep
    sanctuaries.
  * Fix retreat code not to respect conditionals.  Attackers could
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ Changes to Empire 4.3.1 - Wed Apr  5 18:51:49 UTC 2006
  * Fix retreat and edit to zero-terminate retreat paths.
    Theoretically abusable for gaining information.
  * Fix format string crash bugs in load, spy and bomb.
- * Fix telegram editor: empty telegrams were broken in 4.2.21. ~p
-   before the first line of text never worked.
+ * Fix the telegram editor: empty telegrams were broken in 4.2.21, and
+   ~p before the first line of text never worked.
  * Fix ancient bridge building race condition that could break the
    test whether the player can afford the bridge.
  * Fix trade lot change detection in set command.  Probably abusable.